Wysłany: 2006-10-10, 18:21 Proźba o sprawdzenie pracy..
Musze napisac prace na angielski o wygranje na loterii. Nie jestem dobra z gramatyki. Mam ogromną prożbe czy moglibyście sprawdzić moje opowiadanie i poprawić błędy?? Z góry wielkei dzięki:*
He lived marks in London there she worked as sprzedawca in shop. As usual after work, fate sent on lottery. He deleted always this myself number. He believed, that it will win end and long been dreamt of car will buy itself as well as it will send one's family onto holidays to Greece. Just and sure evening checking numbers, which became wylosowane Mark could not believe! He won largest rate of 200 000 euro. He could not and to believe this! From time he chose to lottery where fate sent. He received moneys in the morning . They fulfiled him of dream at last , she bought car and he paid whole family for trip to warm countries as well as large part winning passed on onto ill children, and poor people. He got daily much they przychodzili letters with request about help, some people to ask about moneys even to him of house. Marks he had continuous interviews, television and people already enough, which showed finger on street: "This is he”, wogóle did not go out from house. He lost most of friends, because they envied him winning even family oneself from him she reversed. He decided marks to leave from country, he had lives in city already enough where every knows ile has on account. He settled in Ireland. There he put foundations, which it looks after poor children. He get to knew many nice people and from some make friend . He said nobody, that he won so many moneys on lottery, because he feared, that it will meet him this, what in London. It feels really happy now and fulfiled. Contact keeps still with family and some friends but it knows that winning on lottery has one's defects.
He lived in London wherehe worked as shop assistant in the shop. Every day after work, ????fate sent on lottery????. He Always picked the same number. He believed that he will win and ??long been dreamt of car will buy itself as well as it will send one's family onto holidays to Greece.?? .
nie kce mi sie wicej sprawdzac bo musialaby anpisac nowe bo to kipściutkie ...
Może najpierw napisz to po polsku, Moniko, bo w sumie nie rozumiem co piszesz Ew. opisz o co Ci chodzi jakoś dokładniej. Być może o to:
He lived in London and worked there in a shop. He always took part in a lottery, and always placed his bet on the same numbers. He belived in a prize which would let him buy a car and go with his family to Greece. One day his dream came true. He won the biggest prize - 200 000 euro! He could not believe this, but he received the money the next day. He baught the car he wanted and took his family on a trip to Greece. He also gave a large part to ill children and poor people. Every day, someone new asked him for help, even coming to his own house. TV wanted to interview him, people recognized him in the streets. Soon, he stopped leaving home. His friends left him, because they were envious, as his family was. He left the country - in which everybody knew how much money he had - and settled in Ireland. There he made a fund, to take care of poor children. He met a lot of nice people and made friends with some of them. He keeps his prize a secret and feels really happy and fulfilled. He stays in touch with family and friends but knows that winning a lottery has its drawbacks.
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